Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 26 February 2021

Thursday, 25 June 2020

The secret portal

Once upon a time. I opened my desk and there was a portal there… So I closed it with a giant slam then I thought if it was real or not so I opened my desk again hmmm I wonder where it goes? Maybe I should see… So I put my hand in and moved it around so then I jumped in there OW I said. Then I looked around and it was a… oh no why did I do this ahhhhhh I screamed. I got surrounded by island people with spears. They brought me to a cliff with more island people at the top with a giant rock they were about to chuck It on ME!!! I was screaming for help but then I was apparently the prince? I gasped with relief. I saw a giant statue of me. I was so happy I did not die.The end by Tane.

Thursday, 8 August 2019

Book review

Fiction
Title:
The Boy In The Dress
By David walliams and illustrated by Tony ross

The main characters: Dennise, Lisa, dad/denise's and John’s dad, John and mister Hawtrey

                                                                                              




I found this book very funny but it was also quite sad I was feeling a mix of emotions when this book was being read to me, the book started out with  an 11 year old boy felt as if he had nothing to do, he had a normal every boring everyday life until one day one act changes his life forever… I also recommend this book for 7+ as they will probably  burst out laughing.
Ratings: 10-0
Oliver: I give it a 10 star rating
Tane: I give 9 star rating
Lottie: I give this book an 8 out of ten     
Jaxon:I give this   book 9 out ten.
 Ethan I give 10 star rating
 Hahle: I give this a 10.







Thursday, 23 May 2019