Thursday 25 June 2020

The secret portal

Once upon a time. I opened my desk and there was a portal there… So I closed it with a giant slam then I thought if it was real or not so I opened my desk again hmmm I wonder where it goes? Maybe I should see… So I put my hand in and moved it around so then I jumped in there OW I said. Then I looked around and it was a… oh no why did I do this ahhhhhh I screamed. I got surrounded by island people with spears. They brought me to a cliff with more island people at the top with a giant rock they were about to chuck It on ME!!! I was screaming for help but then I was apparently the prince? I gasped with relief. I saw a giant statue of me. I was so happy I did not die.The end by Tane.

2 comments:

  1. wow i really like your story

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  2. that is incredible luckily you didnt die

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