persevere writing

 dear Tania Gibson. 

I think we should have a trampoline park in Greymouth because it will give

The town something to do and it might attract more people to Greymouth and there could be lessons for people that are bad on trampolines and most of the money can go to the council to get more fun stuff for Greymouth.

you will get heaps of money out of it because people have been wanting one for ages and then we won't have to travel somewhere to go to one and there is lots of land to build it on.

There could be foam pits, dodge ball, heaps of tramp and a parkour part and there could be food and water to keep The people entertained and definitely toilets. 

today we were doing persuasive writing I was doing persuasive writing about a trampoline park in Greymouth. The End sensorily by Tane.